Cameron’s 100 word challenge…

Posted on January 26, 2013 by admin

Leicester tigers were up againts Bath. Leicester tigers were passing beautifuly l
Lewis Moody was  was’nt playing because  he was feeling guilty about leaving Leicsester tiger and refuesed to play.Leicester was playing beautifuly but one of the bath  players fouled ben young . toby flood took the conversion and scored half time.they marched back ond to the pitch. they played well they was scoring very awesomely.

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9 Responses to Cameron’s 100 word challenge…

  1. Miss Shearer says:
    January 27, 2013 at 11:20 am

    Good commentary Cameron but you were meant to write a story… Some great adverbs here though! (And remember, proper nouns need capital letters.)

  2. missjackson says:
    January 27, 2013 at 2:38 pm

    A good effort Cameron. I agree with Miss Shearer’s comments, maybe you can adapt this report and make it a story.

  3. matthewoak11 says:
    February 7, 2013 at 9:32 am

    you have all the puchowason

  4. toby says:
    February 7, 2013 at 9:34 am

    it is good camorron

  5. patientegbenoma says:
    February 7, 2013 at 6:37 pm

    Wow IMPRESSIVE!!

  6. charlie says:
    March 13, 2013 at 11:15 am

    this is good. (:

  7. tom geary says:
    April 25, 2013 at 8:22 am

    realy good commentary camy

  8. 6CSH_Melissa says:
    November 9, 2013 at 3:41 pm

    fantastic

  9. melissa says:
    November 9, 2013 at 6:03 pm

    amazing really good well done .

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