It was a dark and stormy night.I could see nothing as I was pitch darkness.I knew where I was,I was in the dark damp cellar.I heard a drip…drip… drip.Was it blood or was it a leaking tap?.Who knew?.Then I heard it a tap…tap…tap.Was it the door upstairs?.I was spooked as I felt a cold chill run down my back.I felt a cold bony hand reach out and grab my shoulder,I screamed the most pitch scream ever!.I turned and saw nothing.Was I going crazy?What was happening?.
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Well done Megan you have really created suspense in your story You have used both short and long sentences, retorical questions, as well as ellipsis.
Was it blood? Who touched you?
I’m glad you used exciting punctuation as this really adds suspense to your story!
How do you creat theas amasing 100 word chalenges?