As I walked up the stairs I heard a bang a thud, I looked behind me I saw a shadow, i took a deep breath and took slow steps up the stairs! at once I gasped in shock the house had been burgled my locket, my locket of love had gone. I went running into my mum’s room with my heart racing I looked in the jewellery box and the heart the savour heart had gone courageously I went rushing out the house shivering and quivering and ran up the street to my mothers work told her and she fainted ohh no!!!!
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You have used some great WOW words Andie. 🙂
Next time remember to check your work.
You have used some excellent vocabulary in your story Andie well done, just remember to write in seperate sentences not one big long one 🙂
coooooooooool story I liked how you described how him or her rushed out of the house