There was darkness. I was in the middle of no where, waiting for a bus. I heard a noise. Was it a bus or not ? something or someone jumped out at me rrrraaaaaaa okey it was just my friend
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There was darkness. I was in the middle of no where, waiting for a bus. I heard a noise. Was it a bus or not ? something or someone jumped out at me rrrraaaaaaa okey it was just my friend
You didn’t even need 100 words to write a great story Georgie, well done! To make it more exciting next time you could use a wider range of punctuation such as exclamation marks and ellipsis.
A good effort Georgie, maybe could build the suspense further by adding more description. 🙂
good going
good