I really like how you have organised your points – it makes them very clear to read. My wish for next time is that you could back up your arguments with examples, such as telling me about a specific beach that is amazing or the name of the museum. Well done 🙂
You have been persuasive avout Turkey. Next time maybe you could tell us some of the sites you can see. 🙂
you have spellt about wrong!
I really like how you have organised your points – it makes them very clear to read. My wish for next time is that you could back up your arguments with examples, such as telling me about a specific beach that is amazing or the name of the museum. Well done 🙂