I would love a purple funky car! I really like your use of adjectives in this Nicholas – very desciptive. Just be careful with some of your words in past tense – for example ‘saw’ not ‘sore’. Well done.
Well done Nicholas it’s good to see you improving your work. Keep it up 🙂
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I would love a purple funky car! I really like your use of adjectives in this Nicholas – very desciptive. Just be careful with some of your words in past tense – for example ‘saw’ not ‘sore’. Well done.
Well done Nicholas it’s good to see you improving your work. Keep it up 🙂